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The star's maker by ToryoNoDoroppu

:iconxredmemory:
Hello,I'm here to give you a very short critique!
Hope it will help you ;)

Good things - I love the way you colored the background and her skin,The scenario is really good,In general this deviation is awesome.

Bad things - The lines are a little sketchy

- for Sai,using the curve tool on the other layer option (the one with the little pen in it) is the best to make line-art.

You know,the lines remind me about how in anime's if something was going to move in the background,they would of make it look different (Sorry if this offends you ^^;)

because the character looks a little unrelated to the background because the line art,

And to be honest with the curve tool it will probably make it worse xD
well i have no idea,but you should try!

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:bulletyellow: Also,i don't know if this is intended or not,but her eyes are really different,
But that probably is intended isn't it?;)

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That's it!
Hope its okay! :iconilikeitplz:
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ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for take the time to write this critique^^
Thanks for the advices I hope to improve with the things you mentioned :)
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xReDMemory Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Np!;3

cool!
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